Peer explanation.
This is a picture of me playing Shiaya on my 45 fighter. A fighter is an offensive and solo specific class. Unfortunately, this was when i was being attacked by enemies when they should not have been attacking. This is because portal camping is not allowed. Portal camping is url bannable and if you do it, your account can be banned for it. Aeria games hosts Shaiya for anyone to play for free. You are not allowed to be attacked once you have entered a zone through a portal. Exceptions include, if u buff inside a zone, or move after portaling in. However, I was trying to report these people for portal camping and this was supposed to be a piece of evidence.
Kindergartner explanation.
this picture isn't about real things. That is a good guy being attacked. The bad guys want to hurt her. They are not supposed to. It's mean to hurt someone. That picture above is about a game. It is called Shaiya. I play that game, that's why that picture is here.
2 comments:
I like how descriptive this piece is and how it can be understood. Its cool how you chose to write by first saying something that is somewhat confusing to a non-player. Then the next sentence you come back and say what each thing in the previous sentence is. It kept me wondering 'well what does that mean? i better keep reading on.' One thing i had trouble with was keeping up with where you were going. As a person who has never played shiaya, i was easily confused because you jumped around a lot. This may not be evident to you because you are highly skilled in the game.
This was very well written! Reading the first sentence really explained to me what the picture was about. It kind of dragged on, but I understand that you needed to prove a point. I think you jumped around about diffent things, so that was sort of confusing. But overall it was very descriptive! I like how you know alot about what you picked!
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